Cam — 4/5 — 2M ago

The plot is interesting with a catching mystery. Generally, the story seems well-written except for an extreme overuse of the descriptive phrasing "It was X. Not Y. Not Z. But X". There are no sound effects, which I think is good; the story and writing can stand alone without such. The narrator, virtual voice, is very monotone and puts sudden pauses into sentences - it's annoying to listen to.