Anonymous — 4/5 — 18 days ago

This story has very good potential but too much repetition of events in the past and the presumable future gets really tiring. If you don't change your strategy in stretching the episode the listeners and readers will eventually get tired. The repetition is totally unnecessary. The voice is good but the way you are telling the story is quite boring too. You have to make it more active to captivate listeners. again the plot is great but the development isn't so impressive especially so that many details are redundant.