Truly, Madly, 'Major'ly

Yanika Johnson — 3/5 — 1M ago

This has to be the most innocent, proper, softest romance story I’ve ever listened. I love a good story when the couple doesn’t have the annoying miscommunication like most do. But asking permission for every touch is frankly absurd in a relationship. All issues gets resolved too calmly, it’s not realistic. Writer, the story would be better if the wife was at least powerful. Everything is so modest it’s uncomfortable. Where are the emotions? I give 3 to the story because it had potential. Narration is fine. There aren’t really any sound effect that’s memorable I read as far as 77 Ep. I may give it more chances because I’m hopeful. But I have a feeling I’ll stop due to lack of patience waiting for a meaningful connection.

PhePhe — 5/5 — 1M ago

I enjoyed this story! It’s a bit historically traditional but interesting I like the characters Cole is such a gentleman Eleanor is to naive though

Felicia — 1/5 — 1M ago

This is written from a young perspective! This reminds me of a portion of “Trading Up”! Just some silly azz writing! DOES ANYONE WRITE FOR GROWNUPS???

Lu — 1/5 — 1M ago

at one point the general's voice changed to a Russian accent, which totally did not fit the storyline. thankfully changed back. but the consistency of the storyline. it's crazy. like why didn't he ever tell me this? you've known him for 2 days and now it's always he always did this or I've never seen him do that before girl. how much can happen in 24 to 48 hours? And the rank you keep changing his rank. we've established. he's a general. oh, he's a colonel nope, still a general. keep hopping all over the place and you don't even know your own storyline. if it was consistently and well written, it could be a good story, but it's seriously needs an editor unfortunately.. since I love to read, I'm going to have to leave this story. but before I do, the crack about women on base are a novelty. she's like a unicorn because it's an army base and we don't have women here is thoroughly insulting and degrading!