Dead World System

dee — 4/5 — 9 days ago

The only negative I have about this story is that the author can't keep some names straight. Some people are bashing the writer due to his story including teenagers in sexual relationships, even though it is written in a post apocalyptic stage. Most are incapable of thinking outside of their little self imposed reality. In a world like today, where most children never grow up, or only become adult toddlers, of course having sex with a 13 year old is bonkers, because you are sleeping with a child, mentally and emotionally. However in a post apocalyptic scenario, or a pre-industrialistic society, children by the very necessity of survival grow up much faster, taking on an adult mentality and emotional mindset sometimes as early as their pre teens, but virtually all in their early teens. You do not have sex with a child. But in a world where a 13 year old isn't a child, then it is simply a matter of course. Bravo to the author for being able to understand this and write it in the transitional stage mindset that the story is written in.

Craig A — 5/5 — 14 days ago

This author is brilliant in the way he incorporated actual human psych into a fantasy post apocalyptic world! Allot of people are bashing the author for his MC dating a 15 year old. apparently they haven't thought about the fact that she's the only one who genuinely cares for him while the others are essentially using him for survival.. I don't want to spoil to much but simply put this is a Post apocalyptic world! there are no more Laws! where that happens evil people show their true colors and Good people struggle to maintain their morality without the fear of the government locking them up. Think before you post ignorant comments people.. P. S. Well done author not many can accomplish this fusion of realistic human psych and fantasy.. or they are to afraid to for fear of the ignorant people acting like they are the epitome of morality when in reality they would turn to scum bags if they were in the stories setting.

James Clark — 5/5 — 25 days ago

The author sounds like a chomo however marriage with 13 year olds is not surprising in an apocalyptic world hell it was common in the 30's in the USA.

louislamaze — 5/5 — 1M ago

I would say I like the story because I've read God and Devil world novel till the ending the only thing about this that had me a little bit off at the starting was the names but for people who reading this what you might not like one is the too young teenagers eat it at the starting and it keeps thinking about sex all the time like he thirsty too much that's annoying aside from that I love the original nurse about this novel he doesn't seem copy and paste like a lot of novels nowadays so if you could get through a little bit of things that will annoy you a little here and there it's a very great realistic novel

pg3daming — 5/5 — 1M ago

good so far

Anonymous — 4/5 — 1M ago

The story is good with an realistic MC but it got really weird when the mc picked a 16 year old to be his girlfriend.