Bhagwati Shekhawat — 5/5 — 10M ago
Author is great writer..nice comedy and romance
cute angel — 5/5 — 10M ago
story ko bich me close nehi karoge promise karo🤧🫠
Sneha meashar❤ — 5/5 — 10M ago
lovely story awesome 👍👍👍 nice very nice 👍👍
Rupal — 5/5 — 9M ago
This story,,,, like all your other stories, is a runaway hit. It's a tale of father-son hatred, reminiscent of Mafia Brothers. A heroine shouldn't appear so weak and helpless, even when she's in the company of her husband.,,,,,
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यह स्टोरी भी आपकी बाकी सारी स्टोरी की तरह एकदम ऊपर डुपर हिट है ।।।। बाप बेटे की नफरत पर बनी यह कहानी है जो कुछ-कुछ माफिया ब्रदर की याद दिलाती है।। हीरोइन को इतनी कमजोर और बेबस भी नहीं दिखना चाहिए और पति के लिए पति परमेश्वर वाला भाव भी ज्यादा नहीं होना चाहिए जिससे ,,,,उनकी बदतमीजी या इग्नरेंस को सर माथे लगाया जाए।।।
इस कहानी में सभी कुछ है,,,, कपल्स की भी भरमार है जिससे स्टोरी सुनने में बेहतरीन लगती है ।।।।।🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
Lakhbir Bilung — 5/5 — 10M ago
very good story 💕
ss — 5/5 — 10M ago
Family 😊, Love 🥰, Emotion🤗, Romance 😍, and a lot fun 😝🤣
manisha kumari — 5/5 — 9M ago
lovely story ❤❤❤😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
J G — 5/5 — 1M ago
This story is a perfect blend of family drama, comedy, emotions, and action, making it an incredibly entertaining read from start to finish. The way the author balances the emotional family moments with hilarious situations and unexpected action keeps the story engaging throughout.
The characters are well written, and their interactions—especially the family dynamics—add so much charm and humour to the story. Just when you think you know what’s coming, the story takes an unexpected turn, keeping you curious about what happens next.
A special appreciation to the author for the wonderful writing and storytelling. The narration is engaging, the humour feels natural, and the action sequences add just the right amount of excitement without overpowering the family drama.
Overall, it’s an enjoyable roller-coaster of laughter, emotions, drama, and action. Dont stop this story...
I just wish a real voice had been used instead of a virtual voice.
Mubarak Mubarak — 5/5 — 5M ago
a story bahut bahut jyada acchi hai don't stop this story aap daliye ham jarur jarur sunenge mere friendon Ko bhi main bhej dungi is calling aapki story mein har story bahut jyada sunti hun ek bar nahin repeat repeat sunti 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓😘😘😘💓💓💓😘💓💓😘😘💓💓💓😘💓💓💓💓😘
Nipa Kumari — 5/5 — 10M ago
Mast story haa🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😘
