Chris BV — 5/5 — 1yr ago

It’s a great story, however, the narrator (maybe your AI narrator), confusing the names of the characters and the places. One minute they are in LA and in the next sentence, the narrator says Philadelphia. There needs to be a thorough editing on the narration. But nevertheless, I do like the story.

cantdecide — 5/5 — 1yr ago

I love the writing, and the story is captivating. It is quite slow at first, but I'm now addicted.

joanne — 5/5 — 10M ago

Love this story..the ML&FL has a strong character

ticy — 5/5 — 1yr ago

great story line! hope for more!