Kamy Taylor — 4/5 — 2yr ago
the story is to much like The Vampire System. however, I will still listen to it. I just with the person reading didn't sound like he was clenching something. there are parts he is breathless when he shouldn't be, or over excited sounding when not needing to be, or even in pain on regular lines. it gets a little much and can throw the imagination of the story off for me, at least.
japheth gaddis — 5/5 — 2yr ago
Hello, Author! I'll get to the point for my critique first the voice actor has no vocal Range, he doesn't change his voice at all to signify he's speaking as a different person and he speaks really fast which makes it hard for me to figure out who's talking. Otherwise, I don't mind if you take creative inspiration from other books, I'm really excited about what differences MVS and this book have. And the voice actor's voice really compliments the series.
Slushy22 — 5/5 — 1yr ago
Where do I start? The book is great. I love Mason's powers and his abilities and his race and right. It's so unique instead of him. Keeping a secret from his friends, he's actually telling his friends who he is what he is instead of keeping secrets, because in his eyes secrets are just not good to keep for your friends, be your friends or your friends. If you had to hide stuff from your friends, you wouldn't be able to do anything. I'll um, duh. The romance is great. The action is good. Um yeah, it's just a really great book, honestly. If you want to start i do because it's really great
cheekco — 6/5 — 1yr ago
Love this series. I have to say keeps me on the edge. Waiting for more too come. Only thing I can say is the background music is not needed and takes away from the story. Man has an amazing voice. He really doesn’t need the background music.
Nicole — 5/5 — 1yr ago
it's very similar to my vampire system but to me gets to the point faster and doesn't beat around the bush as much I actually like it better. not to mention there's actually some romantic stuff here MVS is mostly devoid of it when there's plenty of room for it.
Ace — 5/5 — 2yr ago
This story is amazing! I got so addicted to the story, and the author is great at hooking the audience. This is definitely a must for anyone who likes books like this. I have heard the entire thing so far and am always checking for the upcoming sections. I love the storytelling and will not go into more so as not to spoil it for anyone, but definitely worth the listen!
Kurami — 5/5 — 1yr ago
over all, I love this story, the audio doesn't always make sense, and sometimes has some messups or says things is a weird way or with a strange tone that doesn't fit the situation, and at times, the plot seems a bit strange, but I like that the mc is put in situations where he has to correct his ego and such and has to realize that he's not as strong and not as high in the rankings of power level or authority and such and is even put in life threatening situations to get stronger rather than simply always getting stronger with ease like many characters are written now. it does seem at times that the story jumps forward to fast but it's not to bad. over all. I'd say it's a 4 out of 5, though I don't personally care that much for sound effects, but I like good and clear voice and descriptions of the story along the way. if possible, I'd suggest the author to make a website or discord or something where ppl who like the story can talk, give suggestions and opinions and even fan art and such as I'd love to see art work of the characters and stuff
Tylor — 5/5 — 1yr ago
even tho it looks and sounds like a copy of mvs it's not it is every different when you get closer to the end
Craig Traffanstedt — 4/5 — 1yr ago
I like the story so far. it does sound like and resembles another book I have read. The chapters, they need to come on with them. I have been stalled at 400 for almost a month. about to replace with a different story.
