CS Chaudhary — 4/5 — 6M ago

The story has a strong plot and an engaging narrative voice that keeps it interesting. However, the dialogues feel overly childish and unrealistic. This is especially noticeable in the protagonist, who, despite being a grown man, talks and behaves like someone trying too hard to act like a “cool hero,” which makes him come across as immature. With more natural and age-appropriate dialogue, the story would be much more impactful.

st karan — 5/5 — 8M ago

The story is excellent and ming blowing 🥰😍. Arjun ki power and his justis wow 🥰