Vivian — 4/5 — 1yr ago

Beginning was great, I felt a little lost at the end when the story was bouncing around between different characters. Over all pretty good.

Daisy — 4/5 — 1yr ago

Story plot and writing were engaging. Give time between chapter publishing delays made the story a bit hard to keep up with and had to backtrack several times just to remember what happened to characters. Repetitive mood music was a bit annoying given the same throughout. Ending was not complete so that was disappointing. Seemed rush given plenty of time between chapters.

Cathy — 4/5 — 26 days ago

Good story, but heart wrenching!