Sweets Valentine — 5/5 — 8M ago

What i don't like about this story is the lackluster reading by the narrator. He reads as if he didn't read over the story before recording it and he sounds uninterested.

Akshay — 5/5 — 7M ago

Overall, I really love the story and its plot—it’s creative, engaging, and one of the best on this app. The world-building, especially concepts like Blue Star and its territories such as Ethelgard and Lyria, is very interesting. However, my biggest issue is with the narration. The voice inconsistencies can be distracting, for example, shifting from fictional places to real-world locations like New York, Chicago, and California breaks immersion. Despite these issues,the art of storytelling is great.especially moments like the story of Hachiko—along with some good comedy, this is definitely worth listening to. Great story overall, and it's Season 2 is started!!😍

clair — 4/5 — 1M ago

Great story over all, but need some editing. Names of things change. MC goes from liking tea and not coffee to coffee and back to tea. Names of places flip flop. Even the dog is occasionally turned into a cat.

Michael — 5/5 — 5M ago

This is one of the better stories. Not sure if the narrator is AI because there are some human error glitches. Either the AI could not follow through with the script structure or the narrator is that good with the thought process of the characters

Speedfire — 5/5 — 6M ago

Even though voice quality is poor I had to give it full stars because this story is engaging if you bypass the voice quality you would love it. It's also very funny 😂😂. Highly recommend!

Mel Adejumo — 5/5 — 7M ago

I’m an og btw. I’ve been here since it only had like 5.9k plays and it’s been a full months. Really good series and really creative too. It gets repetitive from time to time but it’s still addicting to listen to.

Joseph — 5/5 — 7M ago

overall I love story plot. my biggest is the voice complications. the narrative voice messes up a lot. also the geographic screw ups. while I love the idea of blue star and its territories like Ethelgard, lyria etc. I dont like how the names change to real world places like new York, Chicago, California. also the changing back and forth of leelands last name between his original Ford to Linton is confusing. keep it Ford. it does get better in the late 400's but there are still discrepancies.

Bluegirl248 — 5/5 — 8M ago

I absolutely love this series! I love the whole art theme. I'm really into systems, so that aspect is also great. The MCs whole character is a perfect fit. The parallels universe thing is brilliant. Why come up with something yourself when you can use something someone else has already made. It really shortens the whole rise to stardom thing. There is no other series I have listened to where I so eagerly anticipate the release of the next chapter. Thank you for this awesome story. I wish I knew where to find others like it.

Mateo — 5/5 — 3M ago

Story is fantastic and the soundtrack and sound effects really pull you into the story. Unfortunately the narrator whether fake or real sometimes stutters, or acts like a child who doesn’t know what word they are reading and it can pull you out of the story

Harvey Dugan — 5/5 — 3M ago

It is a very interesting and entertaining story. Family friendly, so far, avoiding the usual overused lame intrigue. Background music enhances the enjoyment. I'm loving it!