William Burns — 5/5 — 7M ago

the beginning is a bit lacking in detail and the story seems to rush through with no clear time frame and lacking depth in parts. however it is very enjoyable and better than most on this app

misst — 5/5 — 7M ago

i love this story it reminds me of sword online anime. I could not put it down. I hope they put out more chapters. voice this fits the character really well and I hope there about him and his girl.

Alva James — 5/5 — 7M ago

this is an amazing story and I love it I hope the writer makes more like this

Chuck — 5/5 — 5M ago

Narration is solid solid and speaker is clear. Storyline flows and characters are interesting. Sound effects add enough to give value without overwhelming the speaker.

James green — 5/5 — 5M ago

this is definitely a story to be considered in the top 10. what would make this even better is if Kane can evolve his summons

'O' — 5/5 — 6M ago

Decent plot and sub plots-Few stories make me wish for visual aids. Most stories are only so good. This is one that I would love visuals.

Danny — 5/5 — 7M ago

great story, voice changes on chapters not always great. 1 early chapter believe was 49 was a skip and copy of chapter 50.