Rishav — 3/5 — 1M ago

story or achi ho sakti he par ye jo bina baat ke beech me faltu se sence create kare he ye story ki vibe kharab kar rahe he. Story achi ho sakti he agar focus kare character development of mc of story

Ravi Rajan Kumar — 5/5 — 2M ago

yeh story bahut acchi hai meine bahut sari story suri or yeah story amazing hai or is story ko insta millionaire story se comparison kar sakte hai 🤑 lekin is story mein ek issue hai isme kabhi kabhi naam ulta pulta aa raha hai is issue ko solve Karen se story excellent ho jaayegi

Abhay — 5/5 — 2M ago

sabse gatiya khaniya bol raha kahani ko ulta seedha bol raha hai kya Nasha iss bolne wale ne kahani ko kuch changes kijiye aur naam ki quality ko decide kijiye aur naam ko sahi boliye ____________________________________________________________

Abhay 00r ki — 5/5 — 25 days ago

hello friends this story was too good I recommended you listen I am the God

Saami — 4/5 — 1M ago

kya koi batayega ki aage chalkar Kabir Kiss Ladki se shaadi ya pyar karta hai? please jaldi batao, bore ho raha hu n nahi to sunna yahi khatm ho jaayegi kahani