Anonymous — 5/5 — 7M ago

I like the story so far. I can’t wait to listen to more episodes.

Grandma Susie — 3/5 — 7M ago

Basic sound and narration. Story has potential. Just barely begun. You need some serious editing for continuity. You open each scene repaying close of prior - which is fine. But if you edit one, edit the other to keep in sync. We’ve only got 10 very short episodes to judge on and about 1/4 of it is repeat dialog. It’s a fine device to use, but try opening w a single sentence synopsis vs copy & paste. It will cover your butt in edits and annoy readers less.