noobious — 4/5 — 1M ago

Seems everything is repeated three times over

Justshawn — 2/5 — 1M ago

I honestly believe if this were a competitive Isekai/system book/audiobook seminar competition. This may not be accepted. With ur other books and this one. You should focus on the background of character development. Thats my only complaint. Other than that. I respect the hustle. Wishing u much success.

Anshul — 3/5 — 3 days ago

I'm still on the initial arc, but found the story very similar to a few others I have heard here and the most annoying thing is the random breaks in sentences like The......(4 sec break) stadiumerupted(no pause between words). If this happened like once or twice a chapter then it was still fine but it happens every 2-4 mins.