Kushagra — 5/5 — 1yr ago

Story is smoothly going, all the characters and their plays are well set up. I'm loving Akarsh & Kanvi's chemistry ❤️. Eagerly waiting to see how Akarsh will react when he gets this idea that Lakshya is playing a big game while hiding inside his body and what he will do to protect himself as well as his closed ones from Lakshya's intentions.

YASH KASORIYA — 4/5 — 8M ago

I remember: I have heard this story almost full but I don't remember the name of the story. From where it was copied: Can anyone tell the real story name please?

Tarun Jaat — 5/5 — 9M ago

I Love this story but please bring back the real author who had narrated this story from the beginning and becouse of his voice and his way of narration is the only reason from me to like this audiobook this much The story and the character's of this story are very much awesome and please bring the author back

Nupur Gupte — 5/5 — 1M ago

I really love your story. ❤️ I’ve just started writing, and whenever I get stuck with a plot or storyline, I listen to your story for inspiration. It genuinely helps me a lot, and I’ve learned so much from you. Whenever I struggle with character building or writing dialogues, I try to understand your characters—their personalities, emotions, feelings, and the way they react to different situations. It really helps me understand how to make my own characters feel more real and relatable. Your storytelling has taught me so much about emotions, character development, dialogues, and how to keep a story engaging. I’m truly grateful that your story inspires me whenever I feel stuck or lose confidence in my writing. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful story and for unknowingly helping me become a better writer. 🙏❤️ Keep writing—you’re inspiring someone else to write too! ✨

Kuldeep Morya — 5/5 — 4M ago

Kya kisi ko pata hai kya jo purana speekar banda tha jo story ko staart se play kee raha tha vo banda kyu nhi kee rha h uski aawaz me alag hi jaan dali thi is story me

Anonymous — 5/5 — 4M ago

voice quality not bat but jahape fight hoti hain woha pe jo astro ki takkar hoti hain woh kisi sound main convert kar sakte the muuh se awaj dene se itna atcha sounds nahi aah raha hain.

Akshar Makwana — 5/5 — 5M ago

All characters are good but please remove diya character, diya character it is not match this story

Nightmare — 4/5 — 10M ago

superb and fantastic, wonderful story no doubt about it. amazing story.

arik — 4/5 — 7M ago

yeh story sayed muslimbadi dharona se bani hui hai, jo sayed bahut sare sadi kar sakta hai, pr female aise shadi kar nehi sakte, Akrsh ka humanity bahut low hai

Ninja _ King — 5/5 — 12M ago

very nice story ❣️🔥 loved it