Mrs. Hughey — 5/5 — 2yr ago

Nothing is what it seems! Just when you thought you solved the mystery…PLOT TWIST! The author keeps you on the edge of your seat! Unexpected events throughout the entire book. Wonderful story line overall

CA — 5/5 — 2yr ago

I’m close to half way through the story (although the story is not complete, it is still ongoing). The plot twists and the characters keep you engaged. However, at some point, the heroine, Victoria and the hero, Adolphus need to open their hearts, forgive each other and united as fated mates. Otherwise it is just one bad thing after another keeping them apart. It then becomes a dark story without hope, redemption or love. I would probably give up reading it then as it will not be an uplifting story. I hope this story doesn’t take that turn. 🙏

Laura Lang — 5/5 — 2yr ago

Clare the sister is not a good one she's too immature and so jealous of her sister and I think Clare is the one that killed Victoria's men some how

Nichole Creed — 5/5 — 2yr ago

I just wish the voices between characters were different. especially when changing from male to female. but other than that, it's a great story so far, and I'm looking forward to listening to the rest of it :)

Angie Sparks — 5/5 — 2yr ago

I wished someone proofread this before submitting. The story is very interesting and I like it, but the AI reads all the misspelled words which takes away from the storytelling.

Nana k Agyemang — 5/5 — 2yr ago

I think Charlotte is very wicked and canning. How can you kill your own twin sister and then wanted to kill your niece as well . I now understand the reason why the bible said men own enemies will be from his own family

joy — 5/5 — 2yr ago

now this is the story I was trying to rate when I wrote this was the best story I've ever heard about werewolves and vampires and demons on pocket FM best story on pocket FM for the way it started out to the middle to whatever else is coming but if you change the story to some b******* I am going to write this story I don't know what I'm going to write it okay but I'm going to be very angry because this story is a really really good story with a lesson to be learned about trusting people so easily

Dania — 4/5 — 1yr ago

Wow, I am beyond disappointed. I waited so long to finish this story just to end like this. Sad, very sad. Writer please next story try to come up with a better ending.

Sunny — 5/5 — 1yr ago

This is an impressive storyline, I am amazed by all the plot twists. It is a well crafted piece, and I'm looking forward to finishing it.

Jackie — 5/5 — 1yr ago

Amazing story !! just when you think that you have it figured out then they give you another twist. Love it