lina — 5/5 — 1yr ago

I love the storyline. BUT, how did his dad's name go from Raphael to Ivonne? An unsolicited advice to the author. PLEASE DON'T CHANGE THE CHARACTERS' NAMES. IT IS A BIG TURN OFF, AND MAKES IT CONFUSING TO FOLLOW . AND please change his dad's name back to Raphael. THANKS

Brian pike — 5/5 — 1yr ago

I absolutely love this story, I just started listening and I can't stop listening. It is simply one of the best stories on pocket FM

Marjorie edwards — 5/5 — 1yr ago

I love this story I hope that he reveille. him self soon

Takiyah Holmes — 5/5 — 1yr ago

Good story I love John a little dragged out a few mistakes with the names but it's still good nd interesting

John — 5/5 — 7M ago

Why does it take so long for new stories to be added? I am at the end and waiting two weeks with no additional stories.

Sir James — 5/5 — 1yr ago

I am enjoying the story even if it sounds like other stories I have listened to with very few changes. Human or ai, I just was hoping they could have a consistent pronunciations of words, since it does not, that makes me think it is ai or someone needs to learn how to pronounce words.