manimus — 4/5 — 23 days ago

I love the story and narration but I do get frustrated with the inconsistent power one minute Alex is destroying an unbreakable building with one punch and the next he's struggling to break ropes. He can kill a person that is unbeatable but has trouble with a couple raiders that are using cobbled together weapons.

Jason Blake — 5/5 — 26 days ago

Great story and easy listening. Not many stories keep me listening and paying for it. This is one that I couldn't find a reason to stop and found myself wanting more. Just not releasing fast enough. Try shadow slave if you like this and vampire system and dragons revenge

Roseabella — 5/5 — 1M ago

I am a big fan of this story I absolutely love stories about someone with a system but after the the quiet guy dies you keep mentioning him in the four person group as if he is alive just wanted to let you know again love the story

Xanon SunSol — 5/5 — 4M ago

Fantastic story. In an app filled with systems this one stands out. Well written and easy to follow. Good AI voice and pacing. Loving this so far.

Michael Johnson — 5/5 — 1M ago

Brilliant story is really enjoyable! Just one question: Did you forget about raya, or does she appear later on in the story?

Orlando Vazquez — 5/5 — 2M ago

I don't have one negative thing to say about this story, it's really good and entertaining! keep up the good work.

Eric — 5/5 — 8M ago

Good story. I like where it’s going but “mechanical precision” or anything “mechanical” needs to be used less. It’s getting annoying hearing that all the time

Joseph — 5/5 — 8M ago

Great story, good voice and captivating characters...great job and very entertaining!