Mk-13 — 5/5 — 6M ago

this is some of the best scripted narration that I've ever heard! a bit of a slow burn, but fantastic story pacing, all the same. well explained world, and fantastic narrative dialog. 🥷🏽👍🏽

Aleksandr Morgun — 5/5 — 5M ago

I think the author is awesome and the storyline is great. The only flaw is that the narration could use a little work. Personally this story isn’t much for me but I’m happy that the author isn’t using a virtual voice.

Andrew F — 5/5 — 6M ago

I like the story in general but I couldn't give it true 5 star. if it had multiple different voices that allowed you to know right away that a woman or a man was actually speaking then it would be and absolute 5 star. but overall great storyline

Corey Claudio — 5/5 — 18 days ago

I love how it is giving Terminator vibes and people has powers and abilities

Trompie — 4/5 — 2M ago

(im gonna try not to add spoilers) I'm truly enjoying the show. I like the characters and the plot with all the details given to describe the areas aswell as people. I just want to give my opinion on something that bothers me just a little and if this gets fixed or not ill still be listening because its realy good. sometimes its TO DETAILED. An example is when teacher lans are training the kids and you give us and explanation of what's going on inside his head about how to torture and crush their spirits, then right after that every individual kid gets their own (in detail) explanations of exactly the same outcome but from their point of view. Giving detailed layout about the areas I really enjoy cause then I get a better scope. but doing so for 5 minutes straight then giving the characters 2 lines to say just to jump back on 5 minutes of explanations is just a little much sometimes. keep up the good work. looking forward to the rest 4 star. still negotiable.

Anonymous — 5/5 — 4M ago

Give this a read it’s actually a good one and for someone who only reads great stories like MVS , SuperGene,Legendary beast masster and others i would know

Samantha Kleis — 5/5 — 6M ago

I love this story We need more please. He is one of the best brothers for love for his little brother.

Henry Colling — 5/5 — 7M ago

great story