Marie — 4/5 — 6M ago

It is a good story line but have some contradictions. Try to make sure details remain the same. It can be a bit confusing. Overall, I like.

Sonya — 3/5 — 6M ago

Ok, I am done. I think this writer had two versions of this story and was confused about which to upload. Frankly, I liked the earlier version when Lucas was her childhood sweetheart, and she was stronger and more confident. In this versions she is paranoid and scared, and Lucas is a business partner. I was confused at 1st when I saw it was a 3.9 rating, I thought maybe it was the voice artist. But now I see why it is the story. It takes a nose dive and is very disorganized.

Lydia Hill — 5/5 — 6M ago

Love the story but it all over the place hearing the same parts over and over wish it was straight forward