I absolutely love this story and the voice narrator, and if anyone gives this story a chance I know you'll love it too if you're into magic, action, character....

The voice and sound effects but also the story is also pretty good

The story is really good but I don’t why they stop it but to my knowledge because I have wrote one it look like pocket fm get a complain and....

I love this story and sometimes the background music reminds me of God's eyes and makes me want to listen to it again

Great story. But how are you going to just end it there? I'm very disappointed at how it ended. Because it didn't. Can you please let us(the fan base) know....

This is one of the best stories on the app. The accent range of the narrator, the fast pased story, coupled with small times to catch your breath in the....

I understand trying to make money, but why not just charge for each story and you can gain more customers

Good voice, good story, one of the best on pocket fm, however I'm not sure how to call the end - rushed or unfinished, wouldn't mind the story to cotninue....

I really like this story.. but it’s sad how it’s either not completed or the ending just feels incomplete. Will Aliyosho see Marques again what happened to Marques and Ember....

great story line as a Martial Artist & a Black magician I would be drawned to this already. But you throw in my last name..... now I'm....