Moose Ayder — 4/5 — 5M ago

you can tell there are still gaps but it's definitely put together way better than the other one. whoever did the editing did a good job. it smoothly flows together.

Anonymous — 4/5 — 5M ago

Voice quality and sound effects are fantastic. the plot over all is very well done. However, whoever is writing this tory needs to check the consistency. Levels of advancement and what they are named constantly change. Also, the money scale has changed a couple of times. The system of weapon advancement has changed. Consistency of the world is this stories only drawback. it makes things confusing.

MannyAnime — 5/5 — 6M ago

Definitely one of the best new stories that is unique with a good narrator, background music and sound affects that keep you engrossed with the story. I will hope it gets a lot more views for the Author is doing an awesome job!

Westley — 5/5 — 24 days ago

main narration isnt bad, but anytime the voice of a character is narrated it hurts my ears. Why is everyone so whiny, including the main character? I can get through this story but cant enjoy it.

Raymond — 4/5 — 5M ago

some authors need to finish telling this book. you don't get a 5 star for 1/4 of a book. been waiting almost a full year for you to progress on this book or finish it.

Anonymous — 3/5 — 5M ago

story and plot is overall good. the issue is the story telling and pacing. its all over the place jumping from multiple locations adding characters to restricted areas from ep 88- 95. the story doesn't remember its own values it started at 100 credits to access the area with his sister and then magically jumps too 1000? overall its more confusing then its worth

Buster Guts — 5/5 — 6M ago

So far I am completely engrossed in this story. A tale of a fallen scion forged in the fire of pain that attained absolute redemption. Bravo.