Mouse_man03 — 5/5 — 1yr ago

This ended beautifully I loved every minute of this story

Cece D Ferguson — 5/5 — 1yr ago

I must say the story plot is good. good, but the mispronunciation of a male and female is constant + the grammar is not so good at times so I give this not so good review. the proofreading is not right The Athor needs to go back and do a proper job and there is a lot of mistakes and repeat of the same storyline over and over again. misspronunciation mis-addressing gender and etc

Audrey — 4/5 — 1yr ago

this is a good story but I hope it doesn't end with rayka didn't have a better ending which is love

Harry — 4/5 — 1yr ago

What I hate about it was it kept jumping between the sex of the characters they would say father then phrase him as she. Talk about a male person but uses a female noun

Aviel Ben Israel — 5/5 — 1yr ago

numerous times in this series men are called women and the heroes name pronunciation goes from Raka to Rayka. This don't make sense unless these no proof screening of the story

Anonymous — 5/5 — 1yr ago

good good work like your story 10/10

Janet — 5/5 — 1yr ago

Finally an MC who put people in their place. Enjoyed the story