Lakshminarayana Bhat Bariyalu — 3/5 — 1yr ago

why are you dragin the story.Story telling should be straight forward. Voice quality is okay , but what is the point in reading every punctuation -dot,coma ,boom...dig ding etc. horrible...

sak — 5/5 — 1M ago

The story is good but I always get annoyed when Orion hides his ability and everyone looks down on him. I guess that's part of why the story is good. Overall I think this story is underrated. I've seen many bad stories with 10M+ listeners but this one is only 5M+. It's probably because the story is new but I hope people listen to it more.

PaPa T — 5/5 — 7M ago

This is excellent! No wasted time and no confusing attempts to over explain backgrounds of characters or concepts. Narrative does not attempt to sound different for different characters. Well done!

Anonymous — 5/5 — 1yr ago

Yeah I really like the story and the plot, I love the music a lot but my biggest issue is the author, why he using 100 Metaphors and hyperboles per sentence, as if he’s trying to make his readers dig up Shakespeare himself, so we can cause jealousy between the two. “Other than that great story and music”

aniseto — 5/5 — 1yr ago

I recommend this story to my followers good story line

Angelica Boudreau — 5/5 — 9M ago

Very detailed. Enjoying it immensely!

Geoffrey Hislop — 4/5 — 6M ago

I don't like the writing here. if you're going to write about martial arts. I'd say that they need to research action writers. it may seem easy to write but it's not. you can't go on about feeling when they're fighting. martial arts is about controlled aggression. when you get too angry you lose speed and control. keep the fight fast and flowing. it makes the scene more exciting to me.

Hilyhil — 5/5 — 6M ago

Beautiful narration, read like a poem. Calming background music. Love the story. One of my top 5 stories on here 🥰