noname — 4/5 — 1yr ago

your story lacks pace and a bit of originality its too fast paced and the events are not described properly (I mean the narration of the events is not good )

Harman — 3/5 — 1yr ago

even though plot setting is promising but the Mc is too softhearted and feels sissy. even though Victoria kept attempting to kill him he was like I am okay to make alliance. every female he sees he wanna shag. every female that sees him falls in love with him..

Gurmit — 2/5 — 1yr ago

I was expecting it to be like an omnipotent system but the protagonist is dumb instead of focusing on the strength in fact knowing that he is around others who are much better then him he is ignoring to improve that is the most weak part in the story hope in future it will be resolved